Today is articulation. Ms. Roberts will be taking you down to the counseling office in shifts. While you are in class, you should be working on your final draft. If you have completed your draft, re-read what you have written. Make sure your spelling, grammar, and punctuation is correct. Also make sure you have sensory details in your essay.
In addition, you also need to mirror the format of the sentence below in you own piece of writing. Highlight this sentence in your essay so I can find where you tried to use it.
"There was the fire, snapping and crackling and promising life with every dancing flame."- Jack London.
When I grade your final drafts I will be looking for your sentence.
Tricks for the revision process:
1. Ask yourself did I tell the story I wanted to tell?
2. Are any parts of the story missing?
3. Are there any parts of story that might be confusing to the reader?
4. Did I make any assumptions about what the reader knows about the topic of nature?
5. Is the organization of my essay focused?
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