Good morning everyone,

This morning we began with the nature quiz and now you will have time to work on your nature writing assignment. Tomorrow is articulation and final drafts are due on Friday so make sure you use your time in class wisely.

When revising your rough draft, think back to the feedback you received from your peers on Wednesday. I would also refer back to the nature writing assignment requirements and look through your essay for sensory details and correct grammar and punctuation.

In the beginning of class I showed you the following sentence:

"There was the fire, snapping and crackling and promising life with every dancing flame."- Jack London

Try to mirror the format of this sentence in you own piece of writing. Highlight this sentence in your essay so I find where you tried to use it.